From e772fa7809c30c1e2351e434f8650e003ac9910b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: LingVarr <104311317+LingVarr@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Sun, 2 Jul 2023 07:48:49 +1100 Subject: [PATCH] Fix typos and standardization (#128) --- .../resources/assets/unicopia/lang/en_us.json | 8 +++---- .../spellbook/chapters/air_magic.json | 14 ++++++------ .../spellbook/chapters/crystal_heart.json | 6 ++--- .../spellbook/chapters/dark_magic.json | 20 ++++++++--------- .../spellbook/chapters/fire_magic.json | 22 +++++++++---------- .../spellbook/chapters/ice_magic.json | 16 +++++++------- .../spellbook/chapters/the_otherworldly.json | 6 ++--- 7 files changed, 46 insertions(+), 46 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/main/resources/assets/unicopia/lang/en_us.json b/src/main/resources/assets/unicopia/lang/en_us.json index 0b837fb9..8845d8c4 100644 --- a/src/main/resources/assets/unicopia/lang/en_us.json +++ b/src/main/resources/assets/unicopia/lang/en_us.json @@ -273,7 +273,7 @@ "spell.unicopia.catapult": "Catapult", "spell.unicopia.catapult.lore": "Grabs a nearby block or entity and throws it into the air", "spell.unicopia.dispel_evil": "Dispel Evil", - "spell.unicopia.dispel_evil.lore": "Casts away any nearby unearthly forces.", + "spell.unicopia.dispel_evil.lore": "Casts away any nearby unearthly forces", "gui.unicopia.trait.label": "Element of %s", "gui.unicopia.trait.group": "\n %s", @@ -294,9 +294,9 @@ "trait.unicopia.earth.name": "Earth", "trait.unicopia.earth.description": "Embodies the second natural element. An Earthly energy inherent to all things derived from below the ground.", "trait.unicopia.fire.name": "Fire", - "trait.unicopia.fire.description": "Embodies the third natural element. Complemented by the Element of Air, adds a destructive spark to your spells", + "trait.unicopia.fire.description": "Embodies the third natural element. Complemented by the Element of Air, adds a destructive spark to your spells.", "trait.unicopia.air.name": "Air", - "trait.unicopia.air.description": "Embodies the fourth natural element", + "trait.unicopia.air.description": "Embodies the fourth natural element.", "trait.unicopia.ice.name": "Ice", "trait.unicopia.ice.description": "A chilling touch. Complementary to the Element of Water.", "trait.unicopia.darkness.name": "Darkness", @@ -427,7 +427,7 @@ "gui.unicopia.tribe_selection.confirm.bads.3.unicopia.pegasus": " - Cannot use magic without aid from others", "gui.unicopia.tribe_selection.confirm.bads.4.unicopia.pegasus": "", - "gui.unicopia.tribe_selection.confirm.bads.1.unicopia.bat": " - Light weight makes them weak to brute force attacks.", + "gui.unicopia.tribe_selection.confirm.bads.1.unicopia.bat": " - Light weight makes them weak to brute force attacks", "gui.unicopia.tribe_selection.confirm.bads.2.unicopia.bat": " - Must rest between flights to regain their strength", "gui.unicopia.tribe_selection.confirm.bads.3.unicopia.bat": " - Is sometimes scared of even themselves", "gui.unicopia.tribe_selection.confirm.bads.4.unicopia.bat": " - Is carnivorous. Can eat anything that doesn't make them sick", diff --git a/src/main/resources/data/unicopia/spellbook/chapters/air_magic.json b/src/main/resources/data/unicopia/spellbook/chapters/air_magic.json index 910b56d3..af132f48 100644 --- a/src/main/resources/data/unicopia/spellbook/chapters/air_magic.json +++ b/src/main/resources/data/unicopia/spellbook/chapters/air_magic.json @@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ "level": 3, "elements": [ "Anything relating to flight, or that originated from creatures that fly, or that comes from up above can be considered a source of the air trait.", - "Eg. Feathers", + "Eg. Feathers.", "At the princess' behest", "- Starswirl the Bearded" ] @@ -75,8 +75,8 @@ "elements": [ { "recipe": "unicopia:spells/catapult" }, "Requires:", - "- 1 flame gem\n- At least 9x focus trait\n- At least 9x air trait", - "One can add apply force by the strength trait" + "- 1x flame gem\n- At least 9x focus trait\n- At least 9x air trait", + "* One can add apply force by the strength trait" ] }, { @@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ "level": 2, "elements": [ "A defensive and utility spell. Bubble will trap the target in a giant soap bubble, rendering them defensless.", - "Use it again will pop the bubble", + "Use it again will pop the bubble.", { "x": 125, "y": -20, "width": 32, "height": 32, "texture": "unicopia:textures/gui/trait/air.png" }, { "x": 125, "y": -20, "width": 16, "height": 16, "texture": "unicopia:textures/gui/trait/water.png" } ] @@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ "elements": [ { "recipe": "unicopia:spells/bubble" }, "Requires:", - "- 1 catapult gem\n- At least 9x water trait\n- At least 9x air trait" + "- 1x catapult gem\n- At least 9x water trait\n- At least 9x air trait" ] }, { @@ -147,11 +147,11 @@ "elements": [ { "recipe": "unicopia:spells/feather_fall" }, "Requires:", - "- 1 protection gem\n- At least 20x knowlege trait\n- At least 10x life trait\n- At least 10x generosity trait\n- At least 4x chaos trait" + "- 1x protection gem\n- At least 20x knowlege trait\n- At least 10x life trait\n- At least 10x generosity trait\n- At least 4x chaos trait" ] }, { - "title": "10th Hoof 12", + "title": "10th Hoof '12", "level": 6, "elements": [ "Went to dinner with Commander Huricane and Luna. We got to talking about architecture and Hurricane mentioned the Taz Marehall.", diff --git a/src/main/resources/data/unicopia/spellbook/chapters/crystal_heart.json b/src/main/resources/data/unicopia/spellbook/chapters/crystal_heart.json index 25030fc3..579a8470 100644 --- a/src/main/resources/data/unicopia/spellbook/chapters/crystal_heart.json +++ b/src/main/resources/data/unicopia/spellbook/chapters/crystal_heart.json @@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ "elements": [ { "item": { "item": "unicopia:dragon_breath_scroll" } }, "Status: Confirmed", - "It's, um a scroll that you write somepony's name on it and you hold it in one hoof and something in the other hoof and, like, um it goes whooosh and the item is sent to that pony", + "It's, um a scroll that you write somepony's name on it and you hold it in one hoof and something in the other hoof and, like, um it goes whooosh and the item is sent to that pony.", "- XOXOX Lulu" ] }, @@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ "title": "2nd Hoof '12", "level": 0, "elements": [ - "P.S. Uncle Starswirly is a dunderhead", + "P.S. Uncle Starswirly is a dunderhead.", { "recipe": "unicopia:dragon_breath_scroll" } ] }, @@ -149,7 +149,7 @@ "title": "Grogar's Bell II", "level": 80, "elements": [ - "Legend says that after its first bearer, King Grogar, was driven to madness, the bell was stowed far away", + "Legend says that after its first bearer, King Grogar, was driven to madness, the bell was stowed far away.", "beyond most ponies' grasp, guarded inside an ancient city by an unbeatable beast." ] }, diff --git a/src/main/resources/data/unicopia/spellbook/chapters/dark_magic.json b/src/main/resources/data/unicopia/spellbook/chapters/dark_magic.json index ededc3ae..03cda40e 100644 --- a/src/main/resources/data/unicopia/spellbook/chapters/dark_magic.json +++ b/src/main/resources/data/unicopia/spellbook/chapters/dark_magic.json @@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ "title": "3rd Slep '12", "level": 9, "elements": [ - "Let it be known that it was never my intention that anypony use my work for nefarious purposes. I am a researcher, above and beyond all else. My intentions are pure, and my wants are nothing more than this world to be at peace" + "Let it be known that it was never my intention that anypony use my work for nefarious purposes. I am a researcher, above and beyond all else. My intentions are pure, and my wants are nothing more than this world to be at peace." ] }, { @@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ "elements": [] }, { - "title": "4th Slep 12", + "title": "4th Slep '12", "level": 10, "elements": [ "No review of magic is ever complete without a glimpse into the other side.", @@ -61,8 +61,8 @@ "elements": [ { "recipe": "unicopia:spells/vortex" }, "Requires:", - "- 1 protection gem\n- At least 10x strength trait\n- At least 8x knowledge trait\n- At least 9x air trait", - "+ 10x knowledge to narrow the effect's range to items\n+ Add focus trait to increase duration\n+ add power trait to increase range" + "- 1x protection gem\n- At least 10x strength trait\n- At least 8x knowledge trait\n- At least 9x air trait", + "+ 10x knowledge to narrow the effect's range to items\n+ add focus trait to increase duration\n+ add power trait to increase range" ] }, { @@ -133,7 +133,7 @@ "title": "25th Slep '12", "level": 13, "elements": [ - "I'm sorry for the long delays. Things have been... Busy.", + "I'm sorry for the long delays. Things have been... busy.", "I've learned a lot about these creatures. Attached are some illustrations, done best I could so I wouldn't have to look at the thing directly.", { "text": "Its body is black and vaguely", @@ -277,7 +277,7 @@ "elements": [ { "recipe": "unicopia:spells/displacement" }, "Requires:", - "- 1 gemstone\n- At least 18x knowledge trait\n- At least 10x chaos trait" + "- 1x gemstone\n- At least 18x knowledge trait\n- At least 10x chaos trait" ] }, { @@ -311,7 +311,7 @@ "elements": [ { "recipe": "unicopia:spells/mimic" }, "Requires:", - "- A transmutation gem\nAt least 19x knowledge trait\n- At least 10x life trait\n- At least 4x chaos trait", + "- A transmutation gem\n- At least 19x knowledge trait\n- At least 10x life trait\n- At least 4x chaos trait", "* Add the focus trait to increase the effect's duration" ] }, @@ -350,7 +350,7 @@ "level": 21, "elements": [ { - "text": "It's not enough. Never enough. Crawling. I feel crawling. Oh gods the crawling won't stop", + "text": "It's not enough. Never enough. Crawling. I feel crawling. Oh gods the crawling won't stop.", "obfuscated": true } ] @@ -359,7 +359,7 @@ "title": "??? ???? ??", "level": 33, "elements": [ - "The insomnia. I can't take it. I lie in my bed every night waiting to go to sleep", + "The insomnia. I can't take it. I lie in my bed every night waiting to go to sleep.", "I thought I could stop it, keep it at bay, but I still hear it. That creature. Cold, unfeeling.", "I feel myself being drained any time I'm around it. Is it... feeding on me?", "No, it couldn't be." @@ -381,7 +381,7 @@ "elements": [ { "recipe": "unicopia:spells/dispel_evil" }, "Requires:", - "- A arcane protection gem\n- A displacement gem\n- At least 1x kindness trait\n- At least 1x power trait", + "- An arcane protection gem\n- A displacement gem\n- At least 1x kindness trait\n- At least 1x power trait", "* Add the power trait to increase the effect's range" ] } diff --git a/src/main/resources/data/unicopia/spellbook/chapters/fire_magic.json b/src/main/resources/data/unicopia/spellbook/chapters/fire_magic.json index 2ea1ad7c..a2652e75 100644 --- a/src/main/resources/data/unicopia/spellbook/chapters/fire_magic.json +++ b/src/main/resources/data/unicopia/spellbook/chapters/fire_magic.json @@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ "level": 1, "elements": [ "Creates a heating affect up to a radius of 3 hooves from any surfaces it touches.", - "Useful when one needs a flame in a hurry or to fend off a wild wendigo", + "Useful when one needs a flame in a hurry or to fend off a wild wendigo.", { "x": 125, "y": -20, "width": 32, "height": 32, "texture": "unicopia:textures/gui/trait/fire.png" }, { "x": 125, "y": -20, "width": 16, "height": 16, "texture": "unicopia:textures/gui/trait/fire.png" } ] @@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ "elements": [ { "recipe": "unicopia:spells/flame" }, "Requires:", - "- 1x Gemstone\n- At least 15x fire trait\n- A gem with scorch" + "- 1x gemstone\n- At least 15x fire trait\n- A gem with scorch" ] }, { @@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ "elements": [] }, { - "title": "10 Jum '12", + "title": "10th Jum '12", "level": 0, "elements": [ "Progress?", @@ -112,7 +112,7 @@ "elements": [ "Creates a series of heated projectiles to fling at a target. Upon impact the target will be set alight.", "- Increase focus will allow finer grained control of the projectile's trajectory.", - "- With over 50 focus it's almost like they know where the target is (homing?)", + "- With over 50 focus it's almost like they know where the target is (homing?).", { "x": 125, "y": -20, "width": 32, "height": 32, "texture": "unicopia:textures/gui/trait/fire.png" }, { "x": 125, "y": -20, "width": 16, "height": 16, "texture": "unicopia:textures/gui/trait/focus.png" } ] @@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ "elements": [ { "recipe": "unicopia:spells/fire_bolt" }, "Requires:", - "- At least 9x focus for control and flight\n- 30x fire trait for energy\n- A gem with scorch" + "- At least 9x focus for control and flight\n- 30x fire trait for energy\n- A gem with flame" ] }, { @@ -148,7 +148,7 @@ ] }, { - "title": "11 Jum '12", + "title": "11th Jum '12", "level": 2, "elements": [ "Got a knock at the door today. Luna was very eager to answer it but I had to send her away as it was a messenger from the crown.", @@ -190,7 +190,7 @@ "elements": [] }, { - "title": "20 Jum '12", + "title": "20th Jum '12", "level": 9, "elements": [ "I have word from the crown. They appear satisfied, for now, and have agreed to let my continue my research as I have into the winter.", @@ -200,14 +200,14 @@ ] }, { - "title": "21 Jum '12", + "title": "21st Jum '12", "level": 0, "elements": [ { "text": "I shall visit", "extra": [ { "text": "Commander Hurricane", "obfuscated": true }, - " tomorrow. Perhaps she may shed light onto my predicament" + " tomorrow. Perhaps she may shed light onto my predicament." ] }, "At the princess' behest", @@ -234,7 +234,7 @@ "elements": [ { "recipe": "unicopia:spells/shield" }, "Requires:", - "- 1 gemstone\n- At least 10x strength trait\n- At least 6x focus trait\n- At least 10x power trait", + "- 1x gemstone\n- At least 10x strength trait\n- At least 6x focus trait\n- At least 10x power trait", "\n+ add power trait to increase effect range" ] }, @@ -261,7 +261,7 @@ { "text": "I can't stop now, though...I'm told the situation in the west is growing dire. They have asked me to pick up the pace and produce something we can use to get the upper hoof against the", "extra": [ - { "text": "Changeling Storm", "obfuscated": true} + { "text": "Changeling Storm.", "obfuscated": true} ] } ] diff --git a/src/main/resources/data/unicopia/spellbook/chapters/ice_magic.json b/src/main/resources/data/unicopia/spellbook/chapters/ice_magic.json index f96a9284..d3028fe5 100644 --- a/src/main/resources/data/unicopia/spellbook/chapters/ice_magic.json +++ b/src/main/resources/data/unicopia/spellbook/chapters/ice_magic.json @@ -12,10 +12,10 @@ ] }, { - "title": "4th Trot 12", + "title": "4th Trot '12", "level": 0, "elements": [ - "This is an interesting one. Rather simple, I admit, but Luna insisted I make something cold to help us deal with this darn heat", + "This is an interesting one. Rather simple, I admit, but Luna insisted I make something cold to help us deal with this darn heat.", "All you need is a gem and something cold. Like a snowball.", "At the princess' behest", "- Starswirl the Bearded" @@ -129,8 +129,8 @@ "elements": [ { "recipe": "unicopia:spells/light" }, "Requires:", - "- A fire bolt gem\n- At least 10 focus trait\n- At least 30 life trait\n- At least 30 ice trait", - "* By adding more focus you can extend the duration of the spell." + "- A fire bolt gem\n- At least 10x focus trait\n- At least 30x life trait\n- At least 30x ice trait", + "* By adding more focus you can extend the duration of the spell" ] }, { @@ -179,7 +179,7 @@ "level": 19, "elements": [ "Oh gods, of princesses. I. I don't know how to describe this. My hooves are shaking, I can barely breeze. I'm freezing cold and I can't stop thinking about what happened.", - "I knew there was somethign wrong. I b---knew it. I didn't know what it was at the time, but I'm extremely glad I didn't let Luna scate on that lake." + "I knew there was something wrong. I b---knew it. I didn't know what it was at the time, but I'm extremely glad I didn't let Luna scate on that lake." ] }, { @@ -272,9 +272,9 @@ "elements": [ { "recipe": "unicopia:spells/hydrophobic" }, "Requires:", - "- A gem with frost\n- A with protection\n- At least 6x focus trait", - "* By adding more focus you can extend the duration of the spell.", - "* Add the generosity trait to tie this spell to a location rather than a user." + "- A gem with frost\n- A gem with protection\n- At least 6x focus trait", + "* By adding more focus you can extend the duration of the spell", + "* Add the generosity trait to tie this spell to a location rather than a user" ] } ] diff --git a/src/main/resources/data/unicopia/spellbook/chapters/the_otherworldly.json b/src/main/resources/data/unicopia/spellbook/chapters/the_otherworldly.json index a5256b64..dcca3438 100644 --- a/src/main/resources/data/unicopia/spellbook/chapters/the_otherworldly.json +++ b/src/main/resources/data/unicopia/spellbook/chapters/the_otherworldly.json @@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ { "text": "This spell is not very useful when used on its own, but combined with other traits may become a powerful tool against the", "extra": [ - { "text": "Changeling Swarms", "obfuscated": true } + { "text": "Changeling Swarms.", "obfuscated": true } ] }, { "x": 125, "y": -20, "width": 32, "height": 32, "texture": "unicopia:textures/gui/trait/darkness.png" }, @@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ "elements": [ { "recipe": "unicopia:spells/necromancy" }, "Requires:", - "- 1 life sapping gem\n- At least 10x strength trait\n- At least 8x knowledge trait\n- At least 8x chaos trait\n- At least 19x darkness trait\n- At least 9x poison trait\n- At least 10x blood trait" + "- 1x life sapping gem\n- At least 10x strength trait\n- At least 8x knowledge trait\n- At least 8x chaos trait\n- At least 19x darkness trait\n- At least 9x poison trait\n- At least 10x blood trait" ] }, { @@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ "elements": [ { "recipe": "unicopia:spells/mind_swap" }, "Requires:", - "- A mimic gem\nAt least 19x knowledge trait\n- At least 10x life trait\n- At least 40x chaos trait", + "- A mimic gem\n- At least 19x knowledge trait\n- At least 10x life trait\n- At least 40x chaos trait", "* Add the focus trait to increase the effect's duration" ] }